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These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career seversl times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#people #work #job #change #career #seversl #times #life
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 into a perfect career seems to be difficult nowadays as compared to past
time
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times
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. People try new
things
 with the
change
 in
time
. It is generally seen that
,
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apply
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 a normal guy
do
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does
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 more than one job and after
sometime
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some time
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 he
change
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changes
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 the entire field.
This
 essay will present the pros and drawbacks of the given notion.
To begin
 it, after the inflation in economics,
things
 have changed a lot. It got hard to afford something from the market because of
this
change
.
As a result
,
person
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a person
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 do multiple jobs at a
time
 to fulfill his
and
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or
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their family
her family
his family
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family
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family's
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 needs.
However
,
sometime
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sometimes
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 he has to
also
change
 the line in order
tto
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to
 get money. The most
prefferable
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preferable
benefits
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by
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of
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 doing so is,
he
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that he
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 can adapt
the
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to the
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 changes and can try new
things
everytime
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every time
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.
This
things
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thing
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 leads the
person
 to learn many
things
along with
 the pay. As he goes into
new
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a new
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 field, he gets to know about new
things
.
For example
, to try something new, many youngsters try to work at different places with
wide
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a wide
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 range of rules and regulations.
This
allow
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allows
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 them to get into new
things
 within a short span of
time
.
In contrast
, It consumes a lot of
time
. If a
person
is
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has been
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 working in the same field
from
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for
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 a very long
time
 and
if
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he
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apply
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has decided to go with the
change
,
than
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then
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 at
new
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a new
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 place he try new
things
 and
to get
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apply
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master
in
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apply
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that
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those
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 skills, it requires a plenty amount of
time
.
Additionally
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Additionally,
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 it
also
 shows
a
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an
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 effect on the income which he gets from one place.
For instance
, If a guy is at
senior
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a senior
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 post
than
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then
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 he might be earning a high salary. But after some
time
, if he
decide
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decides
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 to move on with
new
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a new
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 thing,
than
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then
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 he has to start again from the basic pay.
However
,those who do
this
also
 face
problem
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the problem
a problem
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 of money after a span of
time
.
To Conclude
, Even though
change
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the change
a change
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 in job offers benefits, there are
also
 some cons which can't be negotiated at some point.
Moreover
, it
also
 depends on the
person
's belief, whether he wants to continue with the same job for his whole life or enjoy the moment by changing it
oftenly
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often
.
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