The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The statistic presents the annual production of milk in the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala from 1990 to 2010.

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, there was a fluctuation in the milk consumption rate in Holland and a downward trend in Australia

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the other increased gradually in the

last

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20 years.

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, the Netherlands produced the highest number of litres of milk 11.262.000 litres in 1990 before dropping to nearly 120.000 litres in 2000.

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, the trend was a dramatic rise among the others in 2010 by 11.466.000 as the highest production than the other three countries.

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Australia's trend was a sharp drop each following year by nearly 30 per cent of proportion from 11.246.000 to 9.165.000 in 2010.

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, both Tanzania and Guatemala experienced significant growth by double the percentage every 10 years.

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Tanzania remained the highest production rather than Guatemala but still had no more than 10 percent values compared to the Netherlands.

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