The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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pieces of informations
informations
that Correct your spelling
information
explained
through the bar chart and the graph. The bar chart Add a missing verb
are explained
showed
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shows
expend
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expenses
on
fast Change preposition
of
food
in Use synonyms
UK
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the UK
1990
, Change preposition
in 1990
while
the graph Linking Words
represented
the number Wrong verb form
represents
on
fast Change preposition
of
food
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consumption's
. As seen Change the noun form
consumptions
consumption
that
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apply
people
at high Use synonyms
income
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level
tend to spend more on fast Fix the agreement mistake
levels
food
compared to Use synonyms
people
from middle or low financial Use synonyms
background
. It was Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
also
noticed that Linking Words
among
1970 until 1990, hamburgers Change preposition
from
was
the most favourite fast Change the verb form
were
foods
than Fix the agreement mistake
food
pizza
or Use synonyms
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
.
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People
with a big Use synonyms
sallary
had a bigger Correct your spelling
salary
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chance
change
to afford Correct your spelling
chance
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apply
the
fast Correct article usage
apply
food
, it was proved by the data from the bar chart which showed that Use synonyms
people
with high Use synonyms
income
spent almost Use synonyms
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apply
a
half pence per week Correct article usage
apply
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on
for
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on
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hamburgers
hamburger
, Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
while
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people
with an Use synonyms
income
below Use synonyms
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apply
the
average spent no more than 35 pence per week. It was Correct article usage
apply
same
as Correct article usage
the same
pizza
, which Use synonyms
have
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has
bigger
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a bigger
expend
on Replace the word
expenditure
people
with high Use synonyms
Use synonyms
income
. Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
However
, the desire to Linking Words
bought
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buy
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
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product
were higher Fix the agreement mistake
products
on
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in
people
with Use synonyms
averange
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an average
income
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of arround
arround
a quarter pence per week followed by low Correct your spelling
around
income
and high Use synonyms
income
at Use synonyms
last
of the rank.
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On the other hand
, the number of Linking Words
consumption
on fast Use synonyms
food
in 1970 had Use synonyms
the
bigger proportion Correct article usage
a
by
Change preposition
of
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
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aproximatelly
300 Correct your spelling
approximately
grammes
, Use synonyms
while
the interest Linking Words
on
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in
pizza
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
hamburger
was below a hundred Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
grammes
. Use synonyms
as
time flies, Capitalize word
As
this
amount of Linking Words
consumption
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on
Change preposition
of
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
had Use synonyms
fall
into 200 Change the verb form
fallen
grammes
by 1990, Use synonyms
Linking Words
moreover
the Add a comma
moreover,
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburger
showed an Use synonyms
oposite
trend which significantly increased more than four times from the first record. Correct your spelling
opposite
The
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Pizza
pizza
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consumption
has grown Use synonyms
into
500 Change preposition
to
grammes
and the Use synonyms
hamburger
was 300 Use synonyms
grammes
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, consumption, people, income, pizza, fish, chips, hamburger, grammes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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