The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in

Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
There are two
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pieces of informations
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informations
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information
that
explained
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are explained
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through the bar chart and the graph. The bar chart
showed
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shows
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the
expend
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expenses
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on
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of
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fast
food
in
UK
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the UK
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1990
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in 1990
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,
while
the graph
represented
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represents
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the number
on
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of
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fast
food
consumption's
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consumptions
consumption
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. As seen
that
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apply
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people
at high
income
level
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levels
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tend to spend more on fast
food
compared to
people
from middle or low financial
background
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backgrounds
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. It was
also
noticed that
among
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from
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1970 until 1990, hamburgers
was
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were
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the most favourite fast
foods
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food
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than
pizza
or
fish
&
chips
.
People
with a big
sallary
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salary
had a bigger
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chance
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change
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chance
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to afford
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apply
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the
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apply
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fast
food
, it was proved by the data from the bar chart which showed that
people
with high
income
spent almost
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apply
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a
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apply
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half pence per week
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on
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for
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on
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hamburgers
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hamburger
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hamburgers
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,
while
people
with an
income
below
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apply
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the
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average spent no more than 35 pence per week. It was
same
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the same
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as
pizza
, which
have
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has
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bigger
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a bigger
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expend
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expenditure
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on
people
with high
income
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incomes
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.
However
, the desire to
bought
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buy
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fish
&
chips
product
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products
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were higher
on
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in
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people
with
averange
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an average
income
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of arround
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arround
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around
a quarter pence per week followed by low
income
and high
income
at
last
of the rank.
On the other hand
, the number of
consumption
on fast
food
in 1970 had
the
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a
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bigger proportion
by
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of
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fish
and
chips
aproximatelly
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approximately
300
grammes
,
while
the interest
on
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in
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pizza
and
hamburger
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hamburgers
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was below a hundred
grammes
.
as
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time flies,
this
amount of
consumption
on
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of
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fish
and
chips
had
fall
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fallen
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into 200
grammes
by 1990,
moreover
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moreover,
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the
pizza
and
hamburger
showed an
oposite
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opposite
trend which significantly increased more than four times from the first record.
The
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Pizza
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pizza
consumption
has grown
into
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to
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500
grammes
and the
hamburger
was 300
grammes
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, consumption, people, income, pizza, fish, chips, hamburger, grammes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Fast food
  • Income groups
  • High-income
  • Low-income
  • Medium-income
  • Hamburgers
  • Fried chicken
  • Fish & chips
  • Consumption
  • Trends
  • Significant increase
  • Decline
  • Popularity
  • Spending patterns
  • Consumption trends
  • Lifestyle
  • Preferences
  • Prices
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