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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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There are two
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informations
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information
 that
explained
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are explained
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 through the bar chart and the graph. The bar chart
showed
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shows
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 the
expend
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expenses
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on
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of
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 fast
food
 in
UK
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the UK
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1990
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in 1990
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,
while
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represented
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represents
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 the number
on
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of
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 fast
food
consumption's
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consumptions
consumption
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. As seen
that
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apply
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people
 at high
income
level
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levels
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 tend to spend more on fast
food
 compared to
people
 from middle or low financial
background
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backgrounds
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. It was
also
 noticed that
among
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from
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 1970 until 1990, hamburgers
was
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were
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 the most favourite fast
foods
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food
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 than
pizza
 or
fish
 &
chips
.
People
 with a big
sallary
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salary
 had a bigger
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chance
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change
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chance
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 to afford
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apply
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the
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apply
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fast
food
, it was proved by the data from the bar chart which showed that
people
 with high
income
 spent almost
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apply
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a
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half pence per week
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on
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for
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on
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hamburgers
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hamburger
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hamburgers
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,
while
people
 with an
income
 below
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apply
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the
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average spent no more than 35 pence per week. It was
same
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the same
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 as
pizza
, which
have
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has
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bigger
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a bigger
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expend
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expenditure
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 on
people
 with high
income
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incomes
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.
However
, the desire to
bought
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buy
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fish
 &
chips
product
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products
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 were higher
on
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in
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people
 with
averange
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an average
income
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of arround
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arround
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around
 a quarter pence per week followed by low
income
 and high
income
 at
last
 of the rank.
On the other hand
, the number of
consumption
 on fast
food
 in 1970 had
the
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a
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 bigger proportion
by
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of
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fish
 and
chips
aproximatelly
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approximately
 300
grammes
,
while
 the interest
on
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in
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pizza
 and
hamburger
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hamburgers
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 was below a hundred
grammes
.
as
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 time flies,
this
 amount of
consumption
on
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of
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fish
 and
chips
 had
fall
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fallen
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 into 200
grammes
 by 1990,
moreover
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moreover,
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 the
pizza
 and
hamburger
 showed an
oposite
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opposite
 trend which significantly increased more than four times from the first record.
The
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Pizza
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pizza
consumption
 has grown
into
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to
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 500
grammes
 and the
hamburger
 was 300
grammes
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, consumption, people, income, pizza, fish, chips, hamburger, grammes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Fast food
  • Income groups
  • High-income
  • Low-income
  • Medium-income
  • Hamburgers
  • Fried chicken
  • Fish & chips
  • Consumption
  • Trends
  • Significant increase
  • Decline
  • Popularity
  • Spending patterns
  • Consumption trends
  • Lifestyle
  • Preferences
  • Prices
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