The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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There are two
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pieces of informations

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informations
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information

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that
explained
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are explained

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through the bar chart and the graph. The bar chart
showed
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shows

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the
expend
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expenses

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on
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of

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fast
food
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in
UK
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the UK

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1990
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in 1990

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,
while
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the graph
represented
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represents

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the number
on
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of

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fast
food
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consumption's
Change the noun form
consumptions
consumption

It appears that the noun consumption's should not be in the possessive form. Consider changing it to the non-possessive singular or plural form.

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. As seen
that
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apply

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people
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at high
income
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level
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levels

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tend to spend more on fast
food
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compared to
people
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from middle or low financial
background
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backgrounds

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. It was
also
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noticed that
among
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from

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1970 until 1990, hamburgers
was
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were

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the most favourite fast
foods
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food

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than
pizza
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or
fish
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&
chips
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.
People
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with a big
sallary
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salary

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had a bigger
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chance
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chance

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change
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chance
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to afford
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apply
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apply

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the
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apply
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fast
food
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, it was proved by the data from the bar chart which showed that
people
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with high
income
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spent almost
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apply
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apply

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a
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apply
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half pence per week
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on
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on

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for
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on
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hamburgers
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Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers

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hamburger
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hamburgers
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,
while
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people
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with an
income
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below
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apply
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apply

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the
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apply
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average spent no more than 35 pence per week. It was
same
Correct article usage
the same

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as
pizza
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, which
have
Change the verb form
has

The plural verb have does not appear to agree with the singular subject pizza. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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bigger
Correct article usage
a bigger

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expend
Replace the word
expenditure

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on
people
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with high
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Use synonyms
income
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incomes

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.
However
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, the desire to
bought
Change the form of the verb
buy

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb bought. Consider changing it.

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fish
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&
chips
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product
Fix the agreement mistake
products

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were higher
on
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in

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people
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with
averange
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an average

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income
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of arround
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of arround

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arround
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around
a quarter pence per week followed by low
income
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and high
income
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at
last
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of the rank.
On the other hand
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, the number of
consumption
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on fast
food
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in 1970 had
the
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a

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bigger proportion
by
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of

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fish
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and
chips
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aproximatelly
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approximately

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300
grammes
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,
while
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the interest
on
Change preposition
in

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pizza
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and
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hamburger
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hamburgers

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was below a hundred
grammes
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.
as
Capitalize word
As

The word as should be capitalized in this context.

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time flies,
this
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amount of
consumption
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on
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of

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fish
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and
chips
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had
fall
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fallen

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into 200
grammes
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by 1990,
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Linking Words
moreover
Add a comma
moreover,

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the
pizza
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and
hamburger
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showed an
oposite
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opposite

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trend which significantly increased more than four times from the first record.
The
Correct article usage
Pizza

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pizza
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consumption
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has grown
into
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to

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500
grammes
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and the
hamburger
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was 300
grammes
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, consumption, people, income, pizza, fish, chips, hamburger, grammes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Fast food
  • Income groups
  • High-income
  • Low-income
  • Medium-income
  • Hamburgers
  • Fried chicken
  • Fish & chips
  • Consumption
  • Trends
  • Significant increase
  • Decline
  • Popularity
  • Spending patterns
  • Consumption trends
  • Lifestyle
  • Preferences
  • Prices
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