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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Remarkable information is provided regarding the amount of milk which was produced in four nations in 1990, 2000, and 2010
by
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 the given table. From an
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 view, it can be seen that in all the years,
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 and
Guatemala
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 produced the highest and lowest amount of milk, respectively. By a closer examination, it is obvious that in 1990,
Australia
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 was just lower than
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 (11,262,000
litres
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) with a 16,000
litres
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 difference. The third highest producer is
Tanzania
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 with 87000
litres
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 of milk production and the
last
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 one is
Guatemala
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 which made about ¼ of
Tanzania
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. By a 10-year interval,
Netherlands
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 production decreased to 11,155,000 which is still 50,000 higher than
Australia
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.
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 both experienced growth to 1420000 and 55000, respectively. In 2010, despite
Australia
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, the other countries saw growth in different extents.
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 reached 11,466,000
litres
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, meanwhile,
Australia
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 sank about 2,000,000
litres
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.
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 both shot up by about 130,000 and 29,000, respectively
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Vocabulary: Replace the words netherlands, guatemala, australia, litres, tanzania with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annually
  • production
  • trends
  • increased
  • decreased
  • significantly
  • comparatively
  • figures
  • ranking
  • summarize
  • observations
  • patterns
  • consistently
  • growth
  • decline
  • noticeable
  • highlight
  • emphasize
  • yearly
  • countries
  • data
  • support
  • insights
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