The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins)

This

graph is the

water

cycle which is the continuous movement of

water

on

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. The

water

movement starts in the oceans and ends by the

water

drop

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drops

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to

rain

. It has many mechanisms to produce

rain

that I will describe below.

First,

it starts

by

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with

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the sun rising and shining

to

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on

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the earth. After that power of the sun produces heat that transfers to the surface of

water

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the water

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, in

this

picture refers to the ocean.

Water

is evaporated by heat and vapour

to

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into

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the air. It is 80% of

water

vapours to the air from oceans.

Then

water

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the water

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that vapours

to

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into

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the air condenses itself to make

cloud

formation. The

cloud

is small but when the day passes, many clouds join together to form a big

cloud

. After

that

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the big

cloud

faces cold weather that makes it

rain

. The

rain

falls to the mountain and

runoff

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runs off

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surface groundwater through the ocean again. Some

rain

is not back to the ocean, it is still in some places that have different heights of the ground level and

make

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makes

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some lakes to

these

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plac

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places