The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first bar chart provides an oveview of the percentage of
women
and men
in a country who participat in different houework, while
the second bar chart detail the distibution of time
daily for each gender for variou task.
Overall
, the proportion of men
particpating in home
repair
is higher than women
, while
the propotion of men
participating in cooking and cleaning is lower than women
. In adition
, Correct your spelling
addition
women
's average time
spent on home
repair
is lower than men
's.
The rate of men
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participating
home
repair
is about 10% higher than women
, while
the men
participating in pet care is 2% higher than women
. In contrat
, the proportion of Correct your spelling
contrast
men
participating in cleaning work is about 21% lower than that of women
and the propotion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
men
participating in cooking is about 25% lower than women
.
Women
's average time
spent on home
repair
is about 10 minutes less than men
's, while
the average time
spent taking care of pets is about the same for both. Furthermore
, the average time
spent cleaning by women
is 20 minutes higher than men
and the average time
spent cooking by women
is about 25 minutes higher than men
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, time, home, repair with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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