The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Cement
Making Process
and Concrete Production
for Building Purposes
There are two steps in the process
. One is cement
making processes and two is concrete production
. There are several steps for each processes.
First,
to make cement
, limestone, clay and several equipment are needed. In the first step of the process
, limestone and clay were crushed and turned into powder. The powder then
was mixed in a mixing barrel and then
will go through a rotating heater the next. After it was crushed and heated, the heated and crushed limestone and clay will go through a grinder to make them even more fine. The result is what we know as cement
. The cement
then
was put into bags to be transported into the building site to be use for concrete production
.
The next process
is concrete production
. There are also
several steps in the concrete production
. First,
15 percent of concrete and 25% of sand was added into the concrete machine. Ten percent of water then
added into the mix
. The mix
then
was rotated in the mixer. While
the mixture of cement
, sand and water was mixed in the mixer, 50 percent of gravel was added last
in the mixture. The last
step is to let the mixer mix
the mixture together until it formed a fine concrete mix
, which then
will be used for building purposes.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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