Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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allowances in university and unemployment after

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, leads the majority of

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that

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removing some social

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such

as art and history will increase the prospect job of those graduates

people

,

while

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notion.

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would devastate

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creativity

. There is no way for someone to pour their

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that they cherish most. The next

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artists

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,

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able to draw fascinating

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arts

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because they

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lack

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proffesionals

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professional

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teachers

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teacher

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, demotivating them to continue in

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education. More importantly, by removing historical

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in

univeristy

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university

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removing our

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in the world for the next generation. Young individuals do not have a way to learn

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, thereby our culture and

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cannot be

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. As an impact of it, we do not have any things left to

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.

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, the equality of human life will

be disturb

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.

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, the majority of

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solely focus on technology and science. The place for

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entertainment

will perish as time

continue

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, as an impact, lack of individuals who know how to make an artistic art

that is

enjoyable.

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, the

creativity

of

people

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, making them frustrated not

able

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to produce

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. As a

concequence

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consequence

of it,

the

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societies are suffering from stress and hectic schedules. In conclusion, by making

people

focusing

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only

to

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development

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of technology, it will make our historical life and

creativity

extinct for the next generations, which

is

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impact

on

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several problems.