The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs provide data concerning New Zealand's
imports
from two different countries over a ten-year period, between 1994 and 2004. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is possible to note that the Linking Words
figures
Use synonyms
of
goods bought from Australia were much Change preposition
for
more
higher in comparison to the amount from Japan.
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apply
Imports
from Australia showed in 1994, early Use synonyms
figures
around 4000 million NZ dollars, which Use synonyms
arose
two-fourth until 1998. In the following year, the amount achieved the Correct your spelling
rose
least
rate with 3000 million. Correct word choice
lowest
However
, between 2000 and 2001, it increased dramatically representing Linking Words
figures
around 7,500, followed by fluctuation over the final period and ending with Use synonyms
the
double Correct article usage
apply
of
the initial amount.
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apply
On the other hand
, Japanese Linking Words
imports
began smaller than Australian and fluctuated during the first seven years with Use synonyms
figures
between 6200 and 4100. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, in 2000, the purchase of goods from Japan had a steep decrease until 2004, ending with 1000 million NZ dollars fewer Linking Words
imports
than Use synonyms
in
the beginning of the period.Change the preposition
at
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