The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs provide data concerning New Zealand's
imports
from two different countries over a ten-year period, between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
, it is possible to note that the
figures
of
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goods bought from Australia were much
more
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higher in comparison to the amount from Japan.
Imports
from Australia showed in 1994, early
figures
around 4000 million NZ dollars, which
arose
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rose
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two-fourth until 1998. In the following year, the amount achieved the
least
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lowest
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rate with 3000 million.
However
, between 2000 and 2001, it increased dramatically representing
figures
around 7,500, followed by fluctuation over the final period and ending with
the
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double
of
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the initial amount.
On the other hand
, Japanese
imports
began smaller than Australian and fluctuated during the first seven years with
figures
between 6200 and 4100.
Nonetheless
, in 2000, the purchase of goods from Japan had a steep decrease until 2004, ending with 1000 million NZ dollars fewer
imports
than
in
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the beginning of the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words imports, figures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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