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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of recycling glass
bottles
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 which consists
in
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of
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 six steps
since
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from
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the
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apply
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disposal
until
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to
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its
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daily usage. The
inicial
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initial
 step of recycling glass
bottles
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 begins after the consumption of the product, when the container is disposed
inside
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of inside
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 the correct bin, in
this
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case
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 the green one. In
this
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 step, it is important to separate the glasses by
the
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color
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colour
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. After that, the collection service takes the
disposed
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disposed of
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 material to a recycling facility, where the glasses
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are
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separeted
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separated
 by type and
then
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, they will be washed and sterilized in
propor
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proper
 machines to remove
impurity
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impurities
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. After the cleaning process, the
bottles
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 will be crushed into tiny pieces and melted to be in
liquid
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a liquid
the liquid
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 state, which can be used as a raw material for new glass production. After melted, it can be
molded
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moulded
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 in a machine to become a new vessel. After that, the
bottles
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 are ready to be filled with
product
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products
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, normally beverages, and can be delivered to the supermarkets to be used again by the consumers.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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