You are due to move into a rented apartment next week but you will not be able to due to an unexpected problem. Write a letter to the property manager. In your letter 1) Explain the situation 2) Describe your problems 3) Tell him/her when you think you can move in Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Williams
Dear Ms. Williams,
I am writing to let you know that I
am suppose
to move into Change the verb form
am supposed
rented
Correct article usage
a rented
appartment
next Correct your spelling
apartment
week
.Unfortunately , it will get Use synonyms
delay
by one Wrong verb form
delayed
week
because my Use synonyms
husband
Change noun form
husband's
car
accident Use synonyms
happen
yesterday ,so , we need to address Wrong verb form
happened
to
the police to complete Change preposition
apply
financial
documents . I hope you will understand my Correct article usage
the financial
sitatution
.
Let me explain here , My husband was coming from work Correct your spelling
situation
on
Change preposition
at
regualar
time Correct your spelling
regular
on
his Change preposition
in
car
.Suddenly , Use synonyms
truck
coming from another side Add an article
a truck
block
Replace the word
blocked
view
of Correct article usage
the view
Use synonyms
car
behind it which hit our Add an article
the car
a car
car
. We are lucky that he is Use synonyms
Rephrase
all alright
alright
in Replace the word
right
this
situation but need to Linking Words
conatct
with Correct your spelling
contact
car
company about insurance and Use synonyms
also
deal with the claim we Linking Words
needed it
. Wrong verb form
need
Therefore
, due Linking Words
Linking Words
this
problem we are overdue and Change preposition
to this
i
hope it will solve Change the capitalization
I
with
that Change preposition
in
week
.
Would you please let us Use synonyms
to
stay here for another Change the verb form
apply
week
so we finish all the formalities with Use synonyms
this
apartment and move freely before moving to another Linking Words
loaction
Correct your spelling
location
.
I would really appreciate Change the punctuation
?
if
you help us in our difficult Correct pronoun usage
it if
sitatution
.
Thank you for your consideration,
Yours faithfully,
RoopCorrect your spelling
situation
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Task Achievement
Ensure correct and full adherence to the task by addressing all aspects in a more detailed manner. Expand on the description of the issues you're facing, and provide a clear, specific proposed new move-in date.
Coherence & Cohesion
To improve your score, try to enhance the logical flow of your ideas. Use linking words and phrases to connect sentences and paragraphs smoothly. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea or aspect of the situation for greater clarity.
Task Achievement
Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout your letter. Use full sentences, avoid contractions (e.g., 'I am' instead of 'I'm'), and double-check your writing for any typographical or grammatical errors.
Coherence & Cohesion
Make use of paragraphs to structure your letter effectively, ensuring there's a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. This will help the reader follow your arguments and requests more easily.