The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
THE BAR GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE TOTAL SPENDING ON THREE CATEGORIES BY BRITISH PEOPLE OF VARIOUS
AGE
GROUPS IN 2004.
OVERALL
, THE TOPMOST EXPENDITURE WAS OCCUPIED BY
FOOD
AND
DRINK
WHICH ACCOUNTED FOR HIGHER PERCENTAGES COMPARED WITH OTHER SECTIONS.
WHILE
ENTERTAINMENT WAS POPULAR AMONG THE 61-75
AGE
GROUP, INDIVIDUALS WHO WERE MORE THAN 76 TENDED TO SPEND THEIR MONEY ON
FOOD
AND
DRINK
.
FOOD
AND
DRINK
OCCUPIED THE SIGNIFICANT PARTS WHICH WERE TOPMOST IN THE 31-45, 46-60, AND 76+ AGES GROUP WITH AROUND 13%, 17%, AND 23% IN THE UK IN 2004.
IN ADDITION
, WITH THE INCREASES IN THE AGES,
FOOD
AND
DRINK
SURGED FROM ABOUT 6% TO 23% AMONG PEOPLE WHO WERE UNDER 30 AND MORE THAN 76. REGARDING THE OTHER CLASSIFICATIONS, ENTERTAINMENT SKYROCKETED FROM 6% TO 23% BETWEEN UNDER 30 AND 61-75
AGE
CLASSES;
HOWEVER
, IT DROPPED DRAMATICALLY BY 10% DURING THE
AGE
BETWEEN 61-75 AND 76.
FURTHERMORE
, RESTAURANTS AND HOTELS WERE PREFERRED BY YOUNGER CITIZENS WHO
HAD AGES
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WERE
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UNDER 60. BY THE LIFETIME, THE DEMAND FOR RESTAURANTS AND HOTELS DECREASED AND HIT THE LOWEST POINT IN THE 61-75
AGE
GROUP.
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