The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.

The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of British
students
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in a particular UK University who mastered a second
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other than English in 2000 and 2010.
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, it is apparent from the pictures that the
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who only use English as their
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were only a minority among the others and had decreased over the ten-year period.
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, the
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who were able to speak Spanish were the dominant group in both years.
To begin
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with, Spanish was the
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that the majority of learners used
besides
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English for about 30% in 2000, and had increased to 35% in the next decade.
In addition
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, another
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category had
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risen by 5% from 15% and ranked second in 2010. Meanwhile, the monolingual
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had halved to 10% in ten years time.
Moreover
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, these
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had the same proportions as those who could speak French, which had fallen too.
Lastly
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, learners who used German and those who could speak more than two languages remained the same for both years with only one-tenth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • proficiency
  • linguistic diversity
  • polyglot
  • language acquisition
  • second language (L2)
  • foreign language
  • fluency
  • working knowledge
  • mother tongue
  • language competence
  • language decline
  • cultural exchange
  • global language
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