The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Looking at the graph, a piece of information about the
percentage
of people who worked part-time jobs can be observed in each country of the UK in 1980 and 2010. What is noticeable, is that in
England
and Wales, the number of involved people was higher in comparison with Northern Ireland and Scotland. At
the
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first glance, it is clearly seen that Northern Ireland was the only country whose
percentage
in 1980 where higher (15%) than in 2010 ,where the indicator was just under 10%.
In addition
,it was the lowest number among all countries in
this
year.
In contrast
, the
percentage
of Scottish part-time workers grew significantly from under 10% in 1980 to 20% in 2010. Looking more closely , a difference in
England
and Wales's indicators can be seen.
For example
, in 1980 the
percentage
of
England
workers was around 25%,
while
Wales statistics show more than 30%.
However
, in 2010 the increase almost did not change,
whereas
in
England
it rose to under 30%.
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