The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar
chart
illustrate the amount of Fix the agreement mistake
charts
people
change
who were born inside and outside Verb problem
apply
Australia
and lived in three different places from 1995 to 2010.
overall
, the percentage
of people
who lived in cities was the highest feature according
the period given.
Add the preposition
according to
To begin
with, in 1995 in cities the percentage
of individuals were
born in Correct pronoun usage
who were
another countries
was higher than the Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
percentage
of peple
who Correct your spelling
people
born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
by around 10%. In addition
, there was 40% and around 30% of people
were born outside and humans were born inside Australia
respectively and stayed in Rural areas.
On the other hand
,in towns in 2010 people
who born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
was
more than the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
percentage
of people
who born
outside by around 5%.Add a missing verb
were born
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