The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given data illustrate the
contribution
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of sectors to
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the
economy of the UK in the twentieth
centry
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century
, ranging from
agriculture
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,
manufacturing
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and manufacturing
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, to
business
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and financial services, from 1900 to 2000.
Overall
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we can see that the trend of
sector
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the sector
a sector
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of
business
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and financial services
increase
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increases
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while
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argriculture
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agriculture
and manufacturing decrease obviously.
To begin
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with, from 1990 to 2000, the
contribution
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of manufacturing and
agriculture
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drop
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dropped
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. The percentage of manufacturing
reduce
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reduced
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slightly
that
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apply
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lose
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loss
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from around 40% to 20%.
In contrast
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, the percentage of
agriculture
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go
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went
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down significantly
which
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apply
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drop
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dropping
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from 50% in 1900 to almost 1% in 2000. Apart from that, the trend of
contribution
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of
business
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and financial
business
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rise vitally from 1900 to 2000. It
increase
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increases
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from 2% to 40%. In 1900 and 1950, the
contribution
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of
agriculture
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is
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was
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highest
while
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the
contribution
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of
business
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and financial is the lowest.
However
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, in 2000, the proportion of
contribution
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of
business
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and financial in the largest one
while
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agriculture
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in the lowest.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words contribution, agriculture, business with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Declining trend
  • Agrarian economy
  • Fluctuations
  • Industrial advancements
  • Recessions
  • Significant growth
  • Service-oriented industries
  • Dynamic economic structure
  • Traditional sectors
  • Modern service-based sectors
  • Urbanization
  • Technological advancements
  • Global market integrations
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