You should spend about 20 minutes to write this task. The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart shows the
detail
regarding the process of recycling Fix the agreement mistake
details
from
Change preposition
apply
the
wasted Correct article usage
apply
glass
bottles
to shape a new container by using 3 different stages.Overall
, the
used Correct article usage
apply
bottles
from anywhere are collected to get into the industrial processes, which
the small pieces separated by Change preposition
in which
color
are burned before generating Change the spelling
colour
the
new Correct article usage
apply
bottles
for sale.
Normally, glass
bottles
are well known as the
recycled materials and there are many stations Correct article usage
apply
that
people can drop off for diving these containers from others ,Correct word choice
where
then
the combined bottles
are transferred to the factory as
all steps of 1st stage.
In terms of 2nd stage, the manufacturer of new glasses which has 5 procedures is an important part of recycling. Change preposition
at
First,
the dirty bottles
are cleaned by using the
high-pressure water ,before Correct article usage
apply
groped
into 3 Add a missing verb
being groped
colors
which are brown, green ,and clear. Change the spelling
colours
Next,
the clean bottles
are broken into the
minimal pieces from Correct article usage
apply
glass
factory. After the small glasses are burned in Add an article
the glass
furnace
by high heating (600-800 degrees Celsius), Add an article
the furnace
a furnace
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
turns
to be a recycled liquid which blends with a new liquid Correct subject-verb agreement
turn
for forming
a new bottle in a mould.
Change preposition
to form
As a result
, many new glass
bottles
are ready to be on a shelf in every supermarket completely in last
stage which is Change the article
the last
as
a cycle repeatedly.Change preposition
apply
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