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The graphs below show that post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55.

The graphs below show that post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55.
#graphs #show #post-school #qualifications #canadians #age #groups
The charts show the division of
proffessions amoung
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professionals among
 Canadian people between the age of 25 to 35 and 45 to 55. The number of students with post-graduate qualifications had approximately doubled in the former group, and the interest in some
majors
 had changed. There are some
majors
 which
was
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 more popular
in
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 the older generation of Canadians. As the graph reveals, engineering was nearly twice
interesting
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as interesting
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amoung
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among
middle aged
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middle-aged
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 citizens.
Subsequently
, there are little increases in occupation
at
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in
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 some
majors
.
For example
, humanities and social
sience
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science
sciences
, arts were 1 percent more.
Also
, there were 4% more of
poeple
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people
 who
prefere
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preferred
 nursing in the older age groups.
On the other hand
, there are numerous
majors
 which experienced
the
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growth in the number of attendance in the younger students.
For instance
, the percentage of
proffession
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profession
at
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in
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sience
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science
, maths, computers and MBA was nearly doubled.
Additionally
, there was a 4% growth in
tendency
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the tendency
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 to administration and
2
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a 2
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% rise in Education jobs.
Overall
, the charts
indecate
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indicate
 that
sngineering
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engineering
 and social science and arts were the most popular
proffessions
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professions
,
which
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the popularity dropped in the next generation and
replaced
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 with MBA and computer science and maths.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words majors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • post-secondary education
  • vocational training
  • bachelor's degree
  • master's degree
  • doctorate
  • diploma
  • certificate
  • professional designation
  • full-time education
  • part-time study
  • apprenticeship
  • continuing education
  • adult learning
  • educational attainment
  • workforce qualifications
  • demographic breakdown
  • socio-economic factors
  • statistical analysis
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