the table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
Looking at the table, a comparison between the proportion of staff and
factories
in England and Wales can be observed from 1851 to 1901. What is Use synonyms
noticable
, is that the indicators of employees decreased dramatically throughout 50 years,Correct your spelling
noticeable
notable
while
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number
of Use synonyms
factories
grew.
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To begin
with, the table illustrates that the Linking Words
number
of men involved in Use synonyms
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the
labor
force was higher than women. Change the spelling
labour
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in 1851 there were 287,100 male workers,Add a comma
example,
whereas
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female
indicator was 190,000. Correct article usage
the female
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to
1891 the difference was not Change preposition
in
such
significant,as digits Linking Words
shows
65,000 and 30,000 for men and women respectively. Change the verb form
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In contrast
, in 1901 quite Linking Words
the
similar pattern was illustrated ,so there was almost no difference between the numbers Correct article usage
a
due to
their gender.
Looking more closely, a tendency to increase in Linking Words
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number
of Change the article
a number
the number
factories
can be seen ,as in 1851 there were only 225 ,Use synonyms
however
in 1871 the digit rose around Linking Words
trhee
times. Correct your spelling
three
On the other hand
,regardless Linking Words
the
fact that in 1881 there were 721 Change preposition
of the
manufactures
, until 1901 their indicator declined to 600.
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manufacturers
Overall
, if Linking Words
this
trend continues, Linking Words
a
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the
number
of employees will drop drastically, Use synonyms
while
there will be more Linking Words
factories
.Use synonyms
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