The pie charts below show the comparison of exports in Great Britain over five years.
The pie charts compare the difference
of
exports in Great Britain in the year 2010 and 2015. Change preposition
in
Overall
, machineries
and vehicles remained the top products of the country, Change the wording
machinery
types of machinery
pieces of machinery
while
plastics and organics chemical
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organic chemicals
was
at the bottom.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
To begin
with, machineries
, vehicles, and pharmaceutical items Change the wording
machinery
types of machinery
pieces of machinery
was
the most exported products of the country in 2010 with 29%, 28%, and 27%, respectively. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
While
machineries (30%) and vehicles (29%) production increased in the five year
period, exportation of the pharmaceutical items dramatically decreased from 27% to 18% in 2015.
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five-year
On the other hand
, though plastics and organic chemicals was
the least exported items of the nation in 2010, Change the verb form
were
its
percentage rose after five years. In 2010, Great Britain has produced 9% of Correct pronoun usage
their
plactics
, and it grew to 13% in 2015. With regards to organic chemicals, 3% was added to the nation's revenue in 2015.Correct your spelling
plastics
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