You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter .Describe the item you left behind .Say why it is important to you .Explain what you would like the airline manager to do Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sr/Madam
I am writing to concern to my problem what happened
with
me Change preposition
to
last
week. I returned from my trip on 25th
of June airplane race from Moscow to Paris. My Correct article usage
the 25th
problrm
is that I left my suitcase Correct your spelling
problem
in
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on
airplane
but Add an article
an airplane
the airplane
then
enybody
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everybody
of
your Change preposition
in
airline
administration dose not call me Change noun form
airline's
saying
Change the verb form
to say
for
my item. It is Change preposition
about
colored
black with red lines on it and it opens by zip.
I would like Change the spelling
coloured
that
my suitcase Correct word choice
apply
for
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to
me
Correct your spelling
be
is
more important because it is Unnecessary verb
apply
present
from my friend Correct article usage
a present
that
gave me Correct pronoun usage
who
last
year for my birthday . My suitcase is more
Rephrase
very
waluable
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valuable
for
me, Change preposition
to
that is
way
it is Correct your spelling
why
assential
to be returned Correct your spelling
essential
me
.
I am sure that my item was Change preposition
to me
finded
by your staff of plane, so I ask you one more time send Correct your spelling
found
to
my address them that they can send it Correct pronoun usage
it to
my
. I am looking forward to your Change preposition
to my
dooing
. Here is my postal code AR245K.
Your Correct your spelling
doing
faithfuly
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faithfully
faithful
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Greeting and Closing
Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Your letter should start with a proper greeting and end with a suitable closing. For example, start with 'Dear Sir or Madam' and end with 'Yours faithfully' followed by your name.
Logical Structure
To improve the logical structure, each paragraph should focus on a specific aspect of your request: one on describing the lost item, one explaining its importance, and one detailing what action you would like the airline to take.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Use clear and specific paragraphs for each topic. Begin each paragraph with a sentence that introduces the main idea. This will help the reader to follow your letter more easily.
Complete Response
To completely respond to the task, make sure your letter includes all three requested components: a description of the item, the importance of the item to you, and the action you wish the airline to take. Include any relevant details to make your request clearer.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout your letter. This can be improved by using phrases like 'I would be grateful if...' or 'I kindly request...' instead of direct commands.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
