The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below represents some changes in percentages of people born in and out of
Australia
living in cities, regionals and small towns between 1995 and 2010. Overall
, there were high numbers of humans born within and outside Australia
who lived in metropolitan areas, compared to small towns and regional places.
In 1995, 60% of human beings lived in urban areas outside Australia
and 50% inside Australia
. This
number sharply increased to 80% in 2010 for humans living outside Australia
, and almost 62% inside the country.
The regional area followed with at least 25% of mankind staying there and 40% outside Australia
in 1995. The rural population drastically decreased to an all-time low recording under 20% of people living in and outside Australia
in 2010.
Small towns have always recorded the lowest number of people where they had 20% and below 20% in 1995. 2010 was no different as had a dramatic fall to close to 20%.Submitted by caroloks on
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