The given bar chart shows the difference of the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of international
graduates
from several universities across Canadanian
cities between 2001 and 2006.
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Canadian
Overall
, all university graduates
showed the same trend in the time frame given. The number of graduates
from all cities experienced significant
increase from 2001 to 2006.
In 2001, New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and Quebe Add an article
a significant
was
the top three cities in Canada that produced Change the verb form
were
a
highest Correct article usage
the
international
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number of international
graduates
with more than 5%. In 2006, both New Brunswick and Nova Scotia still became two major contributors. However
, Quebec was replaced with British Columbia in the top three. In 2006, New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and British Columbia accounted for more than 10%.
In more detail, during the period given, British Columbia was the city with a
highest increase which doubled from the initial number. Quebec, Change the article
the
on the other hand
, was the city with a
lowest development with only aboutChange the article
the
3
% increase.Correct article usage
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