The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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It is argued that
while
evaluating a person
, we often take into account his social status
along with
his material possessions. In the meantime, society forgets about genuine values like honour, kindness, and trust. I personally do believe those three are the most valuable qualities and will explain my point of view in this
essay.
It is great to have financial independence, material goods, and high status
. Thus
, a lot of opportunities open up, like further
directions of investment, environmental enhancements, increase in public quality of life, etc. All this
provides a great starting point for assessing the person
, but this
is not enough. I think we have to be honest while
making estimates and judgments because we need to consider what the person
has already done with such
power and what it does. For example
, I used to work for one of the largest IT companies in the world, and the CEO was quite shy, but he spent a huge amount of his personal assets to make the area outside the office look like Disney Land, and it was done to say "thank you" to the company workers.
Nevertheless
, it would not be possible without these old-fashioned things like honour, truth, kindness, and many others. A person
who is all about status
is not able to bring a wealthy life into society. In contrast
, the honest and honoured one will act as a magnet for others and, as a result
, will share his best qualities and values, making other people better by default.
In conclusion, I can say that status
is definitely important, as well as
kindness and honour. So, I could rephrase this
as "Without being kind and honest, it does not matter how rich or statusful a person
is".Submitted by serginio.nick on
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