The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph and pie chart provides the trend of
overall
crime
in the last
year in UK. Moreover
, the Pie chart present kind of crime
which is categorized by 4 kind, such
as violent crime
, property crime
, drug crime
, and public order crime
. British crime
trend is shown on the line graph by number of crime
and age
.
Overall
, according to
considering the criminal age
, was the highest in amoung the younger people, whereas
violent crime
of total recorded crim was notable great at 46%.
In contras, according to
the pie chart, most common crime
in UK estimated violent crime
(46%) , followed by propery rubbery (23%)and drug related case (22%) , despite the lowest amount of cases were public ordder related (9%).
On the other hand
, number of crime
(tens of ) recorded notable on age
between 16-24 such
as 800 thousands
cases recorded among 20 years old people, 700 thousands
case related to the 16 years and 600 thousands
case related to the 16 years. The least amount of crime
rate was during the age
between 44-60, involving less than 100 thousands
of recorded crime
in last
year.Submitted by ariunnyam on
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