You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to thank you for great
Correct pronoun usage
your great
service
.I will cherish this
memory forever.
Before I explain my experience,I want to give some informations
about my visit.I visited Change the wording
information
pieces of information
last
week with my friend.I have a lot of friend
,but all Change to a plural noun
friends
situation
Fix the agreement mistake
situations
good
for us.
Add a missing verb
are good
Last
weekeend’s
part reason for one of my birthday’s Correct your spelling
weekend’s
friend
.His name is John.We wanted to give some gifts and great memories.Your restaurant is Fix the agreement mistake
friends
best
place than Correct word choice
a better
elsewhere
.That’s why we chose your restaurant.
I reckon your service
is famous in city
.That’s why we came Add an article
the city
Change preposition
to you
you
restaurant.I was strongly pleased Change the pronoun
your
your
restaurant’s food and the best Change preposition
with your
service
.Your waiters are welcoming and very friendly.Besides
restaurant’s costs comfortable
for us,though we did not have much money.All of them Add a missing verb
were comfortable
is
perfect from your Correct subject-verb agreement
are
service
.It was amazing
and memorable birthday.Now I have got a lot of feelings.
I want to say that appreciate it.Later we will come back.
Thank you
Yours sincerely,
AliAdd an article
an amazing
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coherence cohesion
Begin by enhancing the clarity of your introduction. Clearly state the purpose of your letter in the first paragraph to immediately inform the reader of your intention.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a logical flow between paragraphs by using appropriate transitional phrases that clearly signal the move from one idea to the next.
coherence cohesion
Structure your paragraphs around single ideas. Each paragraph should introduce and expand on one main point for better clarity and readability.
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Ensure consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. While the informal tone is generally suitable, maintaining professionalism and courtesy is also important.
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Focus on providing specific details about your visit, such as the date and names of dishes or services that were particularly noteworthy, to bolster the depth of your response.
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Pay attention to grammar and vocabulary. Work on varied sentence structures and precise word choice to express your gratitude and satisfaction more effectively and accurately.
coherence cohesion
Conclude your letter by restating your appreciation and explicitly mentioning any future intentions or expectations. This gives your letter a purposeful closing.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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