The line graph gives the percentage of tourist`s visits for England art galleries,pavilions,piers and festivals in Brighton.

The line graph explains the percentage of local travellers who visited art galleries, pavillions, piers and festivals in Brighton, England.

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gallery

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galleries

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and

festival

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festivals

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were seen following a declining trend in terms of sightseers,

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pier

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the pier

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and pavilion saw an increase in

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number of visitors. With regard to the pavilion, starting from early 21% in 1980, and

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increased and reached

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just below 50% in 1995, before declining to 31 % in 2010. In terms of art

gallery

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galleries

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, it followed

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inclining trend, with an

intial

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figure of just above 20 % in 1980 and reached

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just under 40% in the

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1985. Later, it

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went through a continuous fall from 1990 to 2010 as the starting figure was just 20% and the eventual figure was 8%.

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pier

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experienced various fluctuations, travellers were 10% in the beginning,

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finally

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it hit just above 20% in the

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2010. Sightseers who came to visit

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the festival

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festival

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the festival

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in the

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1980 were 30% followed by a gradual decrease in the given time period and ultimately reached just below 30% in the

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2010.