Most people in the world need to work in order to lead a decent life or even just to survive. Many workers are motivated by money: if the job pays well, they are willing to do it. However, some people are not concerned with the size of their pay packet: they simply enjoy their job and choose to do it whether they earn a high salary or not. What is more important – salary or job satisfaction? Discuss and give reasons for your answer.

All people have to

work

to survive , to earn

money

for living and most of them are motivated by

money

.If the salary is good

then

you want to

work

.

Nevertheless

, there are some people that do not choose

money

firstly

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, but choose the

job

which they are likely to do. What is more important -

job

satisfaction

or the amount of

money

you earn , we will discuss in the next paragraphs.

Firstly

,

i

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I

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want to notice that

money

is very important for all of us and nobody can survive without it.There is a big difference between working for

money

and earning because of the thing you like to do or which is your hobby. I think

job

satisfaction

is much

important

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than

the

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job

where you paid much but you do not like the

job

you do,

thus

you can not live doing a

job

which you do not like every day and every moment , in my

opinion

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if you do not like the

job

you can not do it very well , because it isn’t in your interests.Sometimes you

work

in a place where your boss complains too much or

location

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of your office isn’t relevant for you,

makes

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which makes

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you

to

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not

to

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work

even if you get good

money

, which shows that

job

satisfaction

is more important.

However

, without

good

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salary these days you can’t live.

Nonetheless

, sometimes the

job

you like or want to do doesn’t

fulfill

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your desires and makes you

to

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apply

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work

everywhere. Of

course

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course,

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job

satisfaction

is important but if the

job

is good but you can’t afford

yourself

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apply

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things you need or cover your

family

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family's

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lacknesses

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lack nesses

, you are obliged to do the

work

you hate. Today in my opinion 50% of people working not because they like the

job

,

because

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they have to. In

conclusion

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conclusion,

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i

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I

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think doing the

job

you like is better than doing the thing you don’t like but

earn

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earning

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a lot

,

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because stress and other negative things which you face at

work

is

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are

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harmfull

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harmful

for

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you. I hope with the years passing

this

problem will be solved .