The bar chart below shows the percentage od Australian men an women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian
men
and women
of different ages
who engaged in regular exercise.
Overall
, it is clear that
females' figures increased with age, while
the reverse was true for males until middle age and men
saw a lower peak than the corresponding figure for females.
Regarding younger ages
, men
outnumbered women
in regular exercise activity with 52% and 47.7%, respectively.However
, males experienced a decline in the middle ages
, with just under 40, reaching their lowest rate.Although
the figure increased from ages
45 to 65 with a small proportion.Moreover
, almost all rates were below 50%.
In contrast
, young women
did regular physical activity less than their older counterparts.However
, the situation changed, when females between 25-54 ages
in regular exercise reached their peak at 55%. Furthermore
, at ages
55-64 women
's promotion were
again greater than Change the verb form
was
men
's by around 8%. Interestingly, the proportion of men
and women
were almost same who were 65 and older with 46% and 47%, respectively.Submitted by ikromovavazbek01 on
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