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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to manager of the hotel. -Expain the problem -say why the documents are important -suggest a solution

#hotel #home #papers #manager #-expain #-say #documents #-suggest
Dear
sir
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 or Madam, The ground why I am
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addressing
adressing
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addressing
 you is to request you find the
necessity
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necessary
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documents
 that I left at Movarounnahr
hotel
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Hotel
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, kukdala on 22
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February
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february
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 2024 First and foremost, I am Nazimov Yunus and Booked the gathering hall for
meeting
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a meeting
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 with
foreighn
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foreign
 client
o'n
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on
 22
february
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. During the meeting, you the projector suddenly stopped and the gathering was moved by client and me
furthermore
 I lost very important
documents
Moreover
, integrity speaking, I was hurrying to the airport
becouse
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because
 the gathering hall for
meeting
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a meeting
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 with
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a foreighn
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foreighn
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foreign
 client
29
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on 29
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february
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February
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. If
this
documents
was
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 found, we
will
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 not
reach
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reached
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this
 business Please check your hotel gathering hall desk to find my
documents
becouse
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because
 it is necessary to find that help to secure my position in my company. If you find my
documents
then
 fax
it
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 to my company's
adress
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address
. I am grateful to you if you will find my
documents
. Looking forward to your positive response.
Your
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 faithfully Nazimov Yunus
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph conveys a clear, individual point. The transition between explaining the situation and its importance could be smoother.
greeting and closing
Start with a proper greeting specific to the recipient, if known, and a more personalized closing could enhance the professionalism of your letter.
logical structure
Clearly identify the topic of your letter in the opening paragraph to immediately guide the reader to the purpose of your communication.
complete response
Include all parts of the prompt in your response, ensuring to explain why the documents are important in a detailed manner, which was briefly mentioned but not elaborated upon.
suitable writing tone
A more formal tone and careful selection of words would suit the context better, for example, 'Dear Hotel Manager,' rather than 'Dear sir or Madam,' and avoid using informal phrases and casual abbreviations.

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