You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to manager of the hotel. -Expain the problem -say why the documents are important -suggest a solution

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sir

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or Madam, The ground why I am

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addressing

adressing

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addressing

you is to request you find the

necessity

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documents

that I left at Movarounnahr

hotel

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, kukdala on 22

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february

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2024 First and foremost, I am Nazimov Yunus and Booked the gathering hall for

meeting

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a meeting

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with

foreighn

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foreign

client

o'n

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february

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. During the meeting, you the projector suddenly stopped and the gathering was moved by client and me

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I lost very important

documents

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becouse

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because

the gathering hall for

meeting

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with

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foreighn

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foreign

client

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on 29

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february

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. If

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documents

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found, we

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business Please check your hotel gathering hall desk to find my

documents

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it is necessary to find that help to secure my position in my company. If you find my

documents

then

fax

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to my company's

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. I am grateful to you if you will find my

documents

. Looking forward to your positive response.

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faithfully Nazimov Yunus

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph conveys a clear, individual point. The transition between explaining the situation and its importance could be smoother.

greeting and closing

Start with a proper greeting specific to the recipient, if known, and a more personalized closing could enhance the professionalism of your letter.

logical structure

Clearly identify the topic of your letter in the opening paragraph to immediately guide the reader to the purpose of your communication.

complete response

Include all parts of the prompt in your response, ensuring to explain why the documents are important in a detailed manner, which was briefly mentioned but not elaborated upon.

suitable writing tone

A more formal tone and careful selection of words would suit the context better, for example, 'Dear Hotel Manager,' rather than 'Dear sir or Madam,' and avoid using informal phrases and casual abbreviations.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to manager of the hotel. -Expain the problem -say why the documents are important -suggest a solution

Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than other ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think this is happenung? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. in what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss these points of view and give your own opinion.