The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the coment-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the coment-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The left flow chart illustrates the stages in cement manufacture,
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the machinery required in each stage, and the right one shows the process by which concrete is produced from several materials.
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, the key points to note are that cement construction is a complex process that consists of several stages, and that concrete is made from four basic elements with precise proportions. Looking at the left diagram in more detail, we can see that, in general, raw materials
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as limestone and clay are first crushed into powder through a crusher,
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the powder is put into a mixer and passed via a rotating heater where heat is supplied constantly.
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process creates the raw adhesive materials which
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are passed onto a grinder and
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ground into plaster.
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, it is packaged into uniform bags and marketed for sale. After the ingredients are transported to the concrete-making site, they are mixed into a designed mixer, in which cement, sand, water and gravel are thoroughly stirred in varying percentages, 15%, 25%, 10%, and 50%, respectively. Through ample blending, concrete is
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made out.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • raw materials
  • grinding
  • heating process
  • kilns
  • clinker
  • gypsum
  • machinery
  • crushers
  • grinders
  • rotary kilns
  • ball mills
  • sand
  • gravel
  • versatility
  • civil engineering
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