The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below presents the proportion of how many different age
groups
males and females did regular exercise in Australia in 2010.
Overall
, in the
percentage
of people aged 25 to over 65, the number of
women
who worked out regularly was higher than
men
,
while
in the
group
aged 15 to 24 was the opposite. It seemed that more
women
had an exercise habit than
men
in Australia on average. To be specific,
women
in three
groups
( 35 to 44, 45 to 54, 55 to 64) stood at 52.5%, 53.3%, and 53%, respectively, and
women
aged 45 to 54 awareness the highest
percentage
from the given chart. In comparison with the same
groups
of
men
, those aged 35 to 44 years old displayed the lowest
percentage
at 39.5, being the lowest among the six
groups
.
On the other hand
, both
men
and
women
got a similar
percentage
in the over-65 age
group
, at 46.7% and 47.1%, respectively. Even though
women
in the 15 to 24 age
group
had a nice volume as the
group
over 65 years old at 47.7%, it was the only
group
, being lower than
men
(52.8%), at 52%, which showed that teenage
men
tended to exercise more than
women
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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