The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. https://i.postimg.cc/R0x2KHQN/Screenshot-2024-02-24-at-11-18-40.png

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

https://i.postimg.cc/R0x2KHQN/Screenshot-2024-02-24-at-11-18-40.png
The chart displays the participation of Australians in physical activity categorised by gender and
age
in 2010.
Overall
, more
women
participated in regular exercise than
men
. Between the ages of 15-24, a higher proportion of
men
were physically active compared to
women
.
However
, starting from
age
25, the percentage of
women
participating in physical activity surpassed that of
men
. Young
men
between the ages of 15 and 24 exercised more than
women
. After
age
24,
women
started to do more physical activity than
men
with around 50 per cent compared to
men
only around 40 per cent. Whilst, older people aged more than 64 in Australia did around 46% of physical exercises for both males and females. The largest gender difference
participation
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in exercises was seen in the 35-44
age
group which was around 13 percent. It can be seen that only around 30% of
men
engaged in regular exercise compared to over 50% of
women
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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