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seen
, Add a missing verb
been seen
governments
mostly Correct word choice
that governments
spendings are
on art, Verb problem
spend
it
can be observed in public areas where more artistic Correct pronoun usage
which
picture
and posters are displayed. Fix the agreement mistake
pictures
However
, some part of the population does not Linking Words
considering
it as a viable step and Change the verb form
consider
expecting
a development Wrong verb form
expect
on
other things that are socially more important, I Change preposition
in
also
agree with Linking Words
latter
point that there is more need to spend money on health care services and to build educational infrastructure.
The primary reason why Add an article
the latter
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government
should stop spending on art collections is because Add an article
the government
healthcare
system of the country is getting worse. It is a core area which really Correct article usage
the healthcare
need
an eye on it, from Change the verb form
needs
different
Correct article usage
a different
prespective
.Correct your spelling
perspectives
perspective
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, Linking Words
such
as shortage of doctors, Linking Words
not
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and not
have
enough supply of medicines, patients have been waiting for years Unnecessary verb
apply
for getting
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to get
appointment
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an appointment
of
their surgery. Change preposition
for
Use synonyms
Government
should Correct article usage
The government
spent
money to provide free education in Change the verb form
spend
health
care sector so that more and more Correct article usage
the health
aspirant
aspire to take education in the Fix the agreement mistake
aspirants
feild
of Correct your spelling
field
doctor
.If we have enough doctors there will be Fix the agreement mistake
doctors
less
chances of someone Change the quantifier
fewer
will be
waiting for service,Verb problem
apply
Also
, should Linking Words
have
develop Unnecessary verb
apply
appropriate
system for providing health care Add an article
an appropriate
supplys
to all Correct your spelling
supplies
pharmacys
.
Correct your spelling
pharmacies
pharmacy
Second
main reason, that can restrain Add an article
The second
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the spendings
spendings
of Fix the agreement mistake
spending
Use synonyms
government
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the government
from
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on
artistics
goods is Correct your spelling
artistic
educational
infrastructure which Add an article
the educational
an educational
not
up to the mark, Add a missing verb
is not
as per
, following trend of Change preposition
to
increase
population. Every day on radio talk, Replace the word
increasing
public
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the public
showing
their anxiety and Wrong verb form
shows
requesting
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requests
Use synonyms
government
to do something in Add an article
the government
this
area. Students are forced to Linking Words
send
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go
in
private schools Change preposition
to
due to
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lack
of seats in schools, Correct article usage
a lack
due to
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fact
, Correct article usage
the fact
the
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that the
government
is collecting taxes from Use synonyms
public
to provide basic facilities. As per,the numbers of Correct article usage
the public
resident
living Fix the agreement mistake
residents
in particular
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area
, there is Fix the agreement mistake
areas
need
to develop more schools, Correct article usage
a need
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however
if Add a comma
however,
this
problem does not Linking Words
getting
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get
curb
sooner it impact the whole society. Wrong verb form
curbed
For instance
, Linking Words
Pakistance
is behind in education Correct your spelling
Pakistan
therefore
people living there Linking Words
does
not aware Verb problem
are
how
to overcome poverty Change preposition
of how
from
Change preposition
in
there
country.
In conclusion, I believe taking Correct your spelling
their
voice
against Correct article usage
a voice
stop
spending on arts goods should be Replace the word
stopping
encourged
and spending should Correct your spelling
encouraged
to
increase to develop healthcare services and school facilities.Change the verb form
apply
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