The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given colour chart illustrates vital changes in the town of Stromer between 1995 and the present time.
Overall
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, the area of
this
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city has been fixed up more effectively and has a larger number of buildings and driveways than in the past.
To begin
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with, in 1995, in the southeast, there was a huge farmland;
however
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, today, its size has decreased by three times. On one hand, the Stromer had two residential complexes and one shop. In the following years,
this
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number has increased to one block of houses and six new residential apartments,
in particular
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, including six shops and a school between them.
Furthermore
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, on the current map in the northeast, a significant number of trees were cut because of the construction of new buildings, including an airport.
In addition
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, the previous road in 1995 that ran from north to south, connecting farmland and homeland, has been expanded to integrate these facilities around the town. City diggers save the forest on the east and north sides, close to the airport, and a tiny part of the rest in the west, beside the main avenue.
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