The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
The picture illustrates the
process
of coffee
manufacture and preparation for sale on the market.
It is clear that
there are eleven stages in the production of coffee
. The process
begins with the picking of coffee
beans
and ends at the packing stage.
Looking at the coffee
production process
in detail, coffee
beans
must first be picked in the fields. These beans
are then
dried, roasted, and cooled before being put in a grinding machine, which turns the beans
into coffee
granules.
At the sixth stage in the process
, the ground coffee
is mixed with hot water, and the resulting mixture is strained. Next,
the mixture is frozen and then
passed once again through the grinder. After that, the ground, frozen liquid is dried in a vacuum so that the water evaporates, leaving the coffee
granules. Finally
, these granules are packed into coffee
jars for delivery to shops.Submitted by TUTOO on
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