The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below
illustartes
the report of driving Correct your spelling
illustrates
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test
between different genders in one Asian country who could Fix the agreement mistake
tests
got
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get
be got
driving
license in different four years.
Correct article usage
a driving
Overall
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it is clear that
, in 2000 women had the highest per cent.
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According to
the chart, in 1980 nearly 50 % of women passed the Linking Words
test
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while
in that year about 30% of men got the license. Linking Words
In addition
, in 2000 approximately 70% of Linking Words
female
passed the Fix the agreement mistake
females
test
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whereas
in that year almost 50% of Linking Words
male
passed the Fix the agreement mistake
males
test
. Use synonyms
Also
, in 2000 and 2010 men had the same per cent about 50%. Linking Words
Moreover
, it is obvious that,in 1990 men Linking Words
about
15% more than Add a missing verb
were about
from
1980.
In conclusion, as you can see, the highest rate is Change preposition
in
blonged
to the women in 2000. Correct your spelling
belonged
In addition
, the lowest per cent is Linking Words
blonged
to the male in 1980.Correct your spelling
belonged
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