The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph illustrates the volume of the

population

,

birth

rate

, and mortality

rate

in England and Wales during a 300-year period since 1700.

It is clear that

although

population

size and

birth

rate

experienced an increase, death rates showed a fall in the corresponding period. It is evident that

population

size had a significant rise between 1700 and 2000. The

number of

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population

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the population

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experienced

a

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moderate growth since 1700,

then

it

leveled

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levelled

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off at 10

million

for 50 years.

then

It had had a sharp climb for 100 years by 1900 and it continued to grow modestly for a century and reached just under 50

million

in terms of

population

. Mortality

rate

and

Birth

rate

followed almost

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same pattern with some differences. Both of them had

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upward trend at

first,

following

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stability,

perior

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prior

to

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a sharp

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decrease.

Then

both both of them remained almost stable and fell markedly.

Although

between 1950 and 2000

birth

rate

increased

at

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approximately 33

million

,

death

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the death

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rate

leveled off at 20

million

.