Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear

sir

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or Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding my

radio

repairing

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repair

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delay. My name is

himali

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Himali

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.

two

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Two

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weeks ago

i

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I

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bought

radio

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a radio

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from your shop.I am

the

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permanent customer

in

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of

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your shop.

However

,I

try

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to on the

radio

in my house unfortunately didn't work properly.

Thus

,

this

problem started i called

to

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apply

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the

sale

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sales

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department in your shop.happy to say,they

give

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back to me

response

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a response

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as soon as possible.

As a

result

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result,

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they took back my

radio

for

the

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repair.

at

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that time

i

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I

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feel

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felt

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so happy about your service. So previously

i

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I

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mentions

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mentioned

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i

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so

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am so

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happy about your service.

Nevertheless

,now

i

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am so worried about your service.

Reasons

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is that still didn't give back to my

radio

.I want to know what is the reason for the delay.I would like to say,if you can give

good

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a good

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reason

my

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feel very comfortable.

As well

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as i like to say if you can repair give

back

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it back

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to me very quickly.

Due to

in my house don't have any electronic

dives

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devices

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for listen news,music.etc.if you are unable to repair please supply new

radio

.Please

kind enough

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kindly

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consider my request. Thanks. Yours faithfully, Himali, Thanks,