The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given line graph illustrates the number of foreign
visitors
coming to the
Great Britain for a variety of goals during a 20-year period since 1989. Correct article usage
apply
It is clear that
the number of visitors
with different goals saw an increase.
People who came to the UK to meet friends and relatives experienced a sharp climb between 1989 and 2009 and grew to 7 million
. The next year it had a significant fall and reached to
just above
6 Change preposition
apply
millions
.
Business and Change to singular
million
holiday
showed almost Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
same
pattern Correct article usage
the same
staring
1994 until before 2004 and Correct your spelling
starting
then
they reached the same number of almost 7 million
visitors
. After that business purposes took over and saw a dramatic growth and reached to
8 Change preposition
apply
million
visitors
in 2009. But next year holiday purposes took the lead and rechead
Correct your spelling
reached
redhead
a
all-time high among other aims to 9 Change the article
an
million
visitors
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