The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart compares
education
pursued by men and women in Britain for three academic years including information regarding full-time and part-time courses.
Overall
as presented in the diagram, the number of men in further
studies has some fluctuations whereas
there is a gradual increase in women’s education
.
Now turning into the detail, almost a million male students
enrolled in higher education
in the period of 1970-71 which has dropped to merely 8.5 lakhs
students
in 1980-81 and again purged by approximately 50 thousand students
in 1990-91 as a full-time course. According to
part-time education
, there is a slight increase in all three periods.
It is interesting to see the rise in women’s further
education
where there is no decline in both part-time and full-time studies compared to men. Here the number of students
climbed from roughly 7 lakhs
and a lakh in 1970-71 to 11 lakhs
and 2.5 lakhs
in the period of 1990-91 in full-time and part-time respectively.Submitted by thilagaraj7007 on
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