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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart compares
education
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 pursued by men and women in Britain for three academic years including information regarding full-time and part-time courses.
Overall
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 as presented in the diagram, the number of men in
further
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 studies has some fluctuations
whereas
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 there is a gradual increase in women’s
education
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. Now turning into the detail, almost a million male
students
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 enrolled in higher
education
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 in the period of 1970-71 which has dropped to merely 8.5
lakhs
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students
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 in 1980-81 and again purged by approximately 50 thousand
students
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 in 1990-91 as a full-time course.
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 part-time
education
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, there is a slight increase in all three periods. It is interesting to see the rise in women’s
further
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education
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 where there is no decline in both part-time and full-time studies compared to men. Here the number of
students
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 climbed from roughly 7
lakhs
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 and a lakh in 1970-71 to 11
lakhs
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 and 2.5
lakhs
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 in the period of 1990-91 in full-time and part-time respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, students, lakhs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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