The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates how many

women

in the age group of 16-25 played and watched 6 different sports in an unspecified country in 2000.

Overall

women

this

country tended to watch sports more than actually participate in them, with the exception of badminton and

golf

, whose participation rates were higher than viewership rates.

Additionally

, horse riding and racing was the least popular sport among

women

in the surveyed country. Regarding the number of females who watched sports, tennis had the highest percentage, which was 60%. Ranking second in popularity was basketball, which was slightly lower at 55%. After that, the figure for gymnastics viewers was twice as high as those in

golf

, at 20 % and 10%, respectively. Contrastingly, badminton was the least popular among female spectators, at around 4%.

In addition

golf

and horse riding and racing figures were 10% and 6% in turn. In terms of female athletes,

while

basketball had the highest percentage of

women

who participated, which was 50%, horse riding, and racing had the lowest percentage of female participation, at merely 3%.

Furthermore

, tennis and

golf

were chosen by an equal number of female athletes, at 30%.

Also

, more sportswomen participated in badminton than in gymnastics, at 11% and 9%, respectively.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

208 words

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

demographics
participation rates
viewership
temporal trends
societal attitudes
barriers to entry
female athletes
notable discrepancies
speculate
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