The diagram showing the coastal Village of seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram showing the coastal Village of seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting.

The demonstrated map illustrates some changes

occur

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that occurred

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from 1980 to 2010 in

seaville

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Seaville

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which is a coastal Village. Some things are replaced and some

are newly build

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are newly built

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in 30 years .

Overall

Linking Words

, only a hotel in South

West

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western

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part is still in

same

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the same

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place even after many years. So many things are constructed in

eastern

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the eastern

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part like

restaurant

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restaurants

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hotel

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hotels

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, boat

club

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clubs

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and many more and holiday cottages are replaced from

West

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the West

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side

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east

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the east

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side

Use synonyms

. Taking about

western

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the western

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side

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, the whole area of Woodland is

cutted

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cut

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down and a golf course is constructed

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north -west

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north-west

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side

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. All the marsh and holiday cottages were replaced by many permanent houses. In

eastern

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the eastern

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part, there was a lot of empty space, but in 2010 it was filled by building

retirement

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a retirement

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village and boat club. Tea

room

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rooms

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and sand dunes are

swaped

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swapped

swamped

with

restaurant

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restaurants

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and

hotel

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hotels

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. New roads were constructed which

connects

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connect

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the retirement village and holiday cottages by crossing the river to the main road .

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Feb 28, 2024

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

170 words

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The diagram showing the coastal Village of seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting.

Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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