The map below shows the changes in a town after the consultation of a hydroelectric power dam.
The two maps illustrate the transformation of
town
following the construction of a hydroelectric dam.
Correct article usage
the town
Overall
, the town underwent a sign shift in its focus, transformation came at the cost of the town's natural environment, with forests, rare flora and mountains disappearing Linking Words
as a result
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