The map below shows the changes in a town after the consultation of a hydroelectric power dam.

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The two maps illustrate the transformation of

town

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the town

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following the construction of a hydroelectric dam.

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, the town underwent a sign shift in its focus, transformation came at the cost of the town's natural environment, with forests, rare flora and mountains disappearing

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

45 words

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The map below shows the changes in a town after the consultation of a hydroelectric power dam.

Nowdays, advertising aimed at children is on the rise. Some people think this shoul dbe controlled. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?