The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart
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illustrates
the
stastic
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status
of a
counrty's
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country's
export in
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departments during 1 year. ( between 2015 and 2016 )
Overall
, the
stastics
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statistics
of petroleum products was the highest in
this
graph. (
This
number was almost 130
bilion
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billion
dollars
. )
On the other hand
, the lowest part was textiles in 2015 and 2016. The
figure
of
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petroleum products
just
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was just
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little
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over 60
billion
dollars
in 2015,
this
number reached
to
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approximately 65
billion
dollars
in 2016. The number of engineered goods was just below 60
billion
dollars
in 2015 and
this
figure
was just over 60
billion
dollars
in 2016. The
stastics
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statistics
germs and jewellery
was
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aprroximately
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approximately
45
billion
dollars
in 2015,
this
stastics
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statistics
decreased to 40
billion
dollars
in 2016. The
figure
of
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agricultural products was almost 30
billion
dollars
in 2015 and
this
figure
increased slightly and reached
to
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approxiamately
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approximately
33
billion
dollars
in 2016. The
stastics
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statistics
of textiles
was
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were
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just over 25
billion
dollars
in 2015 and
this
figure
increased to
little
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a little
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over 30
billion
dollars
in 2016.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stastics, dollars, figure, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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