On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter Describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to demonstrate my misplaced object
as well as
I am inform
you the insurance provider of your desired course of action.
Change the verb form
inform
Firstly
, I want to justify my lost equipment, which is an iPhone.Then
, it was grey and beautiful
than others.I reckon Correct quantifier usage
more beautiful
this
telephone cost is very expensive and distinguished and also
,this
phone is incredible.
I lost my phone in Bukhara.One day I came in
that city and around similar places.Suddenly I lost .My package has been Change preposition
to
torted
.Correct your spelling
torn
Due to
this
,I lost my phone.But I could not find nowhere
.
I appreciate your understanding and support regarding Rewrite the sentence
could not find anywhere
could find nowhere
this
matter.
The last
thing I want to know is how you covered my condition.I will help you found
my iPhone that you will help me Wrong verb form
find
for
this
reason.I would appreciate it if you assist or cover this
equipmet’s
value.
I hope you will help me and accept my request.
Best regards,
Khamidov AliCorrect your spelling
equipment’s
equipment
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Ensure clarity in describing the lost item, including specific details such as the make, model, and its personal significance, rather than general statements about its appearance and value.
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Provide a clearer, step-by-step narrative of how the item was lost, adding more context and detail to help the reader understand the situation better.
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Maintain a more formal and polite tone throughout the letter. Instead of phrases like 'I want to know,' consider using 'I would like to inquire' or 'I am seeking information on.'
coherence and cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs, each serving a specific purpose (introduction, description of the lost item, explanation of how it was lost, request for assistance). This will enhance the logical structure of your writing.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words and phrases to connect ideas and paragraphs logically, thus improving the flow of information (e.g., 'Firstly,' 'Furthermore,' 'As a result').
coherence and cohesion
Implement a clear greeting and closing. While the current greeting is acceptable, consider using a more personalized closing (e.g., 'Yours faithfully' followed by your full name for a formal letter to someone whose name you do not know).
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.