These days, school should focus more on producing young people who have the skills required to join the workforce, rather than focusing on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is widely accepted nowadays that

proffessions

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professionals

need manpower who is

skillful

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. In

this

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some believe that education should be based on these kinds of skills to introduce them to the actual job market rather than concentrating just on written and non-practical courses.

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how significantly it is important to have

talented

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and skilled workforce rather than

educated

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only. There are some

belifes

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beliefs

point

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to the academic training of the students in schools and overwatch the importance of being skilled. these people justify that if there is no scientific

trainings

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there will not be capabilities

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from it.

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, people who did not pursue university training are not able to participate in scientific disputes and seminars. They

also

believe if governments recruit only skilled people but

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, the rate of innovation will fall down, as they mention that to be creative and innovative one needs to be academically educated. In a nutshell, they assume having

some

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university

degrees

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will be beneficial. There

are

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also

other point

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of view which

indicates

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that what runs the economic

engins

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engines

engine

are

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skillful

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skilful

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workforce and schools should meticulously focus on the outcome which is

ability

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to perform well. They assume academic degree can not meet the

expectation

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expectations

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of the job market and

employers

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that employers

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are

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not

intended

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to hire

those

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of

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unskilled

graduated

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.

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, they mention that if you utilize employees with insufficient skills but

academically

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are academically

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capable, they will not provide positive

result

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results

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for the company.

Also

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they think employing unskilled employees will decrease the productivity in firms which brings about discontentment and

lower

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rate of income or at least

declining

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rate for the firm.

To sum up

, it is

nothworthy

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noteworthy

to mention that not only skill and academic knowledge are highly important in companies but

also

is

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pre-requisite for

entring

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the job market.

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that

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why skill is more important than academic subjects which have been taught in schools,

which

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I strongly believe that talented and

skillful

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skilful

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employees are preferred by corporates these days as their perspective is high income.