One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
In today's Mechanichal era,
traffic
congestion is a pervasive issue in large cities worldwide, cities are stuck with vehicles and creating traffic
jams on roads
. This
essay will discuss how excessive
number of automobiles and outdated public Change the article
an excessive
the excessive
transport
system are the main caused
of Replace the word
causes
this
problem and the most viable solution , to
improve Add a missing verb
is to
communal
Correct article usage
the communal
transport
system and reduce the jam
Fix the agreement mistake
jams
in
Change preposition
on
roads
.
Firstly
, I think the prime reason for jam
is Fix the agreement mistake
jams
highly
dependency on personal Change the adverb
high
transport
. In every household multiple number of
cars, Correct quantifier usage
apply
Correct word choice
and bike
bike
Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
owned
by a family , Add a missing verb
are owned
each
individual have their own wheels Correct word choice
and each
hence
they do not prefer to use communal transit. Secondly
, another main reason is the inadequate infrastructure in the nation. As we see, Many urban areas have road networks that were designed and built decades ago. As compared to current
volume of Add an article
the current
traffic
these network
cannot Change the determiner
this network
these networks
copup
with the present Correct your spelling
cope
traffic
and
leading to blocking. Correct word choice
apply
For instance
, in some cities of the
Uttarpradesh public Correct article usage
apply
prefer
going by their own commuter because of Correct subject-verb agreement
prefers
very
bad network and broken Correct article usage
the very
roads
.
A feasible approach to deal with this
issue is in the hand
of Fix the agreement mistake
hands
government
Correct article usage
the government
and
Correct word choice
apply
as well as
citizens
. By making strict Correct article usage
the citizens
law
regarding to number of wheels a family Fix the agreement mistake
laws
have
. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Moreover
, Investing in more reliable , advance
and frequent public Wrong verb form
advanced
transport
for example
buses, trains, subways
so , the public will Correct word choice
and subways
encourage
to use public transportation.Establish park and ride facilities at key locations outside the city Wrong verb form
be encouraged
center
. Change the spelling
centre
This
encourages commuters to switch from their cars to public transport
for the remainder of their journey and
Correct word choice
apply
lastly
building new roads
, make them wide , building
new connectivity so, the flow will be light.
In conclusion, I believe that making rules Correct word choice
and building
of
not having more vehicles,building new connectivity and Change preposition
about
by
making Change preposition
apply
improvement
in public Fix the agreement mistake
improvements
transport
can undoubtelly
resolve the trouble of excessive Correct your spelling
undoubtedly
traffic
on roads
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