You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organization. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you going to do work experience. In your letter. Thank the manager for the oppurnity to do work experience. Explain what you hope to learn from the work experience Ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my gratitude for giving me an
oppurnity
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opportunity
to gain
work
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experience in your esteemed organization.
This
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oppurnity
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opportunity
will certainly help in achieving my career goals.
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, I hope to learn more about machine learning and artificial intelligence
application
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in
real
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the real
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world. The
work
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experience will prove beneficial for me to better understand software systems which are deployed at client
site
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. I
am expecting
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that
project
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the project
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will give me
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the oppurnity
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oppurnity
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opportunity
to enhance my skill sets.
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, I have
few
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a few
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queries about
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experience. Will I be working in a team or as
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an individual
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contributor? What will be
project
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the project
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timings
.
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Will I get
laptop
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a laptop
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from
company
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the company
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to
work
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on
cutting edge
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technologies
.
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Will I
also
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get
completion
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the completion
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of
certificate
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the certificate
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for training provided by the company
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Can I use
official
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an official
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email for communication
purpose
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purposes
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with office colleagues
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I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jim
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Spelling and Grammar
Ensure you proofread your letter for spelling mistakes (e.g., 'oppurnity' should be 'opportunity') as these errors can impact the reader’s perception of your writing proficiency.
Paragraph Structure
To enhance your letter’s coherence, try to structure it more clearly by including an introductory sentence in every paragraph that outlines the main idea. This helps the reader understand the purpose of each paragraph immediately.
Linking Phrases
In terms of cohesion, using a wider range of linking phrases (besides 'Furthermore' and 'Therefore') can improve the flow of your letter. Experiment with phrases such as 'In addition,' 'Regarding,' or 'Subsequently,' to connect ideas more smoothly.
Task Completion
For task achievement, make sure your questions are concise and directly related to your learning goals. Also, verify that your letter covers all aspects of the prompt: expressing gratitude, stating what you aim to learn, and posing relevant questions.
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