On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter Describe the item you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam
One day
i
lost my Change the capitalization
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bracelet
on my brother's birthday. This
bracelet
was very precious to me. My dad gave me a present on my birthday. My bracelet
was gold. It was very expensive. It is okay , but my dad bought this
bracelet
just for me.
For the first time, my brother celebrated his birthday with his salary. I was wearing a bracelet
that my father had given me. My brother invited me to dance. I'm not sure if i
lost it during the dance.
When we got the Change the capitalization
I
bracelet
, he gave us the check. We have good insurance to cover the costs. If we invest in the campaign, it will cover the costs for us.
Yours faithfully,
AfruzaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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Task Achievement
Ensure that the letter addresses all parts of the task. You mentioned the item lost and how you lost it, but you could clarify what specific action you want the insurance company to take. For example, specify if you seek reimbursement or a replacement.
Coherence & Cohesion
For a more coherent structure, group related ideas together and use clear paragraphing. Each paragraph should convey a single main idea and logically flow into the next paragraph.
Coherence & Cohesion
To enhance logical structure, start your letter with an introduction stating the purpose of the letter, then provide details in the following paragraphs, and conclude with what you expect from the insurance company.
General Advice
Using a variety of sentence structures and more formal language can make your letter sound more professional and polite, which is suitable for communicating with an insurance company.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite